Positive feedback
- "Really effective imagery, clever how the text is integrated on the chair"
- "Very relevant, effective black and white"
- "Strong independent image, thought provoking"
Constructive criticism
- "In need of a more writing, production company, website etc..."
- "Needs more information"
- "There's a white strip at the bottom, doesn't look like it should be there"
Film Review- Just like the poster the average mark was around the 6/10 mark. Once again mostly positive feedback, could use maybe some background colour as it is white. I agree with that, but it is hard to get a colour that fits the formal angle I have tried to approach. Most people have also recommended columns, but for some reason I chose to challenge the normal conforms most film reviewers adopt. But if it is seen as a necessity I may be forced to listen to the positive feedback and change it for the authenticity of the piece.
Positive feedback
- "Good layout, black and white trend works"
- "I like the font of the title"
- "Smartly broken down in to neat and concise sections"
Constructive criticism
- "For the purpose of authenticity, columns are necessary"
- " The black and white is a tiny bit bland, maybe some colour?"
- "The title of the magazine should be bigger"
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